Wow, thanks for the prompt response and offer to help. I wish it was that easy. The story is a combination of romance/love/sci-fi/supernatural. The sci-fi part is spread around the later chapters, so it might not make sense to you. Mostly I'm concerned that the ideas I pulled from my head, including mind-traveling—a person can think of a destination and be transported across galaxies, "wormhole like corridors" branching from a research facility that shift, making them unreliable, verifying corridor location using a device that seeks corresponding harmonics (not sure how the device works. lol), and replaying downloads directly from the brain.
This is the chapter using a download. It's set to "group only," but the pass code 2381 should get you in. Let me know if it does not work; I've never tried it before.
Thanks, again! I'm not asking for a review, not at all! It's only in the draft stage, and I already have edits in mind, but the download concept won't be edited out yet, if at all. I wonder if using email for communications is easier?
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