Super Powers, Transformations and Magic

I'm looking for people who would be interested in taking a look at my first Pokemon fan-fiction. The main character has powers, and it does have two characters that are shrunk. So if you want to take a look, here is the link.


http://www.writing.com/main/books/item_id/1906965-The-Destroyer


I'm looking forward to the views and reviews I get from everyone here.


EDIT. I've noticed that some people have looked at my Pokemon fanfiction, but only the first chapter. And I may know why. I entered my chapters in starting with the first one, to the last one. But for some odd reason, it entered itself in backwards. So instead of you selecting the next option to go forward, you have to select the previous option to go forward. If anyone knows how it ended up like that and how I can fix it quickly, please let me know.