I plan to revisit this after the NaNo challenge, because it was one of my favorite stories. The 1000 word limit handcuffed me, and I want to improve the descriptions of events, making some of what was happening more clear. A proper ending is also needed. I have a few ideas but the truly satisfying finale eludes me.
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