The bonus being, if you take Crys-not really here's advice and leave that paragraph about not being published out, is that you have MORE ROOM to talk about your awesome plot.
I would also be wary of the Hitchhiker's reference. Are there less well known novels you can compare to? And I'm not sure you need to compare your work to what is out there at all. Talk about how those novels missing from today's market and the niche it will create because that could be a better selling point.
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's advice and leave that paragraph about not being published out, is that you have MORE ROOM to talk about your awesome plot. 
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