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Oct 15, 2012 at 11:57pm
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OT: Please Comment on My Work
by A Non-Existent User
I'm working on chapter one of my novel, and I'm to the point where I over-nitipick it. Instead of continuing on, I ask that someone give me feedback. Since the last time I revised it, I have tried to add sprigs of feeling, and action. I am also trying to hint around at a conflict. How does this pan out to you?

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OT: Please Comment on My Work · 10-15-12 11:57pm
by A Non-Existent User

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