This was a bunch of ideas tossed together when i first finished the story. I rearranged the text so it could gain some coherence. DANGER! It might still look odd!
What i am really worried about is that the story (including plot) might be seen as dull by the reader, so if you have any suggestion to improve it, then please let me know!
So if you find the time please review this item. I will do a review of my own on one of the reviewers items to return the favor. Of course you can decide which item you want reviewed.
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