Glad you enjoyed and have actioned most of your feedback, except the spelling (they're right in the U.K. lol). Glad you liked the opening and mentality really wanted to get across a species different to us, but understandable. I thought about them puzzling over why poor people exist but decided to keep shorter.
I'm thinking about changing the bug part terminology, was trying to be clever by not full blown describing them as a species but doing it on the fly :)
Do you have anything you want reviewed back? Happy to!
Snark (aka Mike)
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