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Sep 11, 2012 at 5:09pm
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Edited: September 11, 2012 at 5:11pm
Please review my revised Chapters 1-4
I revised and added to my book Vampyre Protection Program. Please let me know if the changes help or hinder. Thank you! Any and all comments appreciated.

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