Story Cafe

Hello, all! I'm not truly a "newbie", having first signed up in... oh... 2006. However, this is pretty much the first time I've signed back on since then, and I think it's about time I start utilizing this as the positive and helpful resource it's meant to be. So here's my question to you, World.... or, at least, those of you who are kind enough to read this:

I'm currently working on a werewolf (ish) series. The way it's working out now, all of the books in the series are going to be pretty long. The first one has been in the works for about 4 years. Even though I've already written a ton of bits-and-pieces, I'm finally trying to narrow it down and just plow through and finish it. It's not finished at all. Far from it, actually. However, I would very much appreciate critical help. Would anyone object to reading and giving me an HONEST and HELPFUL review of an unfinished product? I really would appreciate it. If I generate enough feedback, I'll post what I have for your reading and reviewing pleasure.

Thank you in advance.