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I will review any short story or novel. No deed to pay although I accept donations.
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Apr 30, 2012 at 9:35am
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Asking For a Review
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Hi Ledan,

I would appreciate if you could take a look at Shadow Wisp -- I know it needs a lot of work, yet can't quite seem to figure out what's wrong. It’s a 1st draft without any editing.

Shadow WIsp
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If Shadow Wisp isn't your cup of tea check out my tales under Asking For Reviews
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Asking For a Review · 04-30-12 9:35am
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