Story Cafe

I really love this journal entry! I have thought that graveyards were creepy places and "hauntings" or whatever but this is soo true because when you think about it, they are actually really beautiful places and are respectable. My favorite parts of this entry were when you said, "What makes it beautiful is that it is a place for everyone no matter whom they are or where they come from. In this chaotic world it is where you find peace and a quiet tranquility after a long or short hard life." and, "They are a part of everyone, either by the past, the present, or the future. Graveyards are beautiful places indeed." There was nothing I would really like to change besides, "There is even one in Main..." is it Maine? And where it says "So wouldn’t art and poetry that has been put on gravestones be beautiful too." be a question. Sorry, I don't wanna be all criticizing your work because it's really good! Nicely done (: