Hi guys! Just got accepted into the group and thought I'd stop by to say hi. This group looks really interesting and I look forward to reading everybody's works!
In the meantime, I have a short 500+ word story that I'd like some comments on. It's going to serve as an opening to a longer piece, but I need to know if the exposition in the form of that long monologue works, or if I should just scrap the whole thing.
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