I really like this piece. You have done a spectacular job with it. Your grammar and punctuation are correct as far as what I noticed. I, in all honesty, would love to see you expand this into a short story. You are a gifted and talented writer and could do very well with it! Thank you for sharing and WRITE ON!
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