I find your paragraph has beautiful descriptions, misplaced commas and poor grammar in places. It's not clear what or who the story is about. If it's about summer, fine, what do you have planned to keep a reader interested? But if it's about Adam, then I'd start with Adam. Written as is, 'One such' should begin a new paragraph.
Overall, it does make sense but the flow could be much better with a few tweaks.
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