The first two entries to a novel I am working on.
I just recently started writing, and I know it may not be very good, but I'm hoping that reviews I receive will be able to help me improve my writing style for future chapters =)
If doing both is too much, feel free to just review one (preferably the latest chapter) as it probably has the least reviews =)
Also, consider these as drafts, as they are probably subject to change before I finish the entire story =P
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