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Nov 30, 2010 at 1:09am
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Review Please :)
by A Non-Existent User
I've been working on this story for a long time and every time I look over it, something always needs to be edited. It's quite frustrating. I would love to know what others think of it and if it needs further face rolling on the keyboard to perfect it XD This is just the Preface but hopefully it will interest you into reading the other chapters ;D

http://www.writing.com/main/view_item/item_id/1728733-Mind-Games-Preface--1524
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Review Please :) · 11-30-10 1:09am
by A Non-Existent User

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