Reviews by Ledan Dark

It is my hope to turn this piece into a full-length fantasy novel or series. However, as is typical I suppose of many other fledgling writers, I worry that it is too bland, voiceless and formulaic, not to mention that it suffers from countless mechanical deficiencies.

It is a work in progress. I am committed to nothing. It is a working title, one that most certainly will change because the title character isn't even the 'primary' protagonist in my loosely outlined 'virtual' framework. My current plan is for the focus and imminent conflict to be with Ann Alaina, not Shuddersome Stoney.

I would appreciate any thoughts you might have on improving it, even if the most recurring thought you have is that it should be immediately stuffed into the recycle bin--especially, I suppose, if that is the case.

Thank you for your time and your consideration.

"Arc of Justice "