Awarded items that deserve a bit of exposure. |
antique sunlight slants in through a skylight only barely opaque enough to admit the color of burnt orange the sound of a rusty hinge the whoosh of fresh air through a door unopened in a year................. (muffled sounds as if struggling with bailed and billowed haystalks) - or stubborn mattresses that refuse to fall down stairways upon command - after which, upon finally staggering into the room, after giving up the struffle - yon prize:
Ya just gotta love all those wild puffs of dust, raised by the handclap action of this particular Standing Ovation - (the last poem disappeared into the delete pile) Hope this one survives........ they can be endangered species around here. I don't so much review 'em...as much as try to keep them a little good company. This one grew on me - about as delighfully subtle as the suppressed smile that will finally not be denied. (and remarkable in its insights) Photos freeze us in time we have the evidence of that - but, as we don't live in ditital scope or celluloid fiber - we are brand and newly different each shutter-click of time............ Captain Midnight Just let me laugh when it's funny and when it's sad, let me cry |
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