Reviews by Ledan Dark

Howdy, Ledan!

You sound like one busy reviewer, but I hope you will have the time to read and review my novella of six chapters before my Extended Membership runs out on October 15. I would say that this novella is anywhere from 50% to 75% done, with the basic story (well, the entire plot) being written out. I am working on the environmental details, so I am conscious that a bit of restructuring is still needed. Beyond that, I'm looking for any and all honest thoughts about this story as a whole.

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