Noticing Newbies

Well hello everyone, my name is Vanessa and I just finally posted 2 chapters up of my story (Creptus Val Saga) after a whole year having this account.

The reason for the delay, was well, I didn't think I was ready just yet. I wanted to share my story (or at least what I got) but at the same time I also wanted it completed. But then I thought why not post the story piece by piece and see if I can get constructive criticism wether it be for plot holes, grammar (which I'm not perfect at, but i at least try), and perhaps character development. In fact, I NEED criticism so I can learn what makes characters relatable and the story interesting.

But anyway, I'm glad to be here and there's so much to read and to do that I feel like my head is spinning.