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May 17, 2010 at 11:19am
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stories needing suggestions
by A Non-Existent User
I am facing some writers/editor's block on two of my stories. Can someone look at them and offer suggestions?

The first story is "Princess Aurora's Dilemma - UnabridgedOpen in new Window.. I am looking to blend more comedy into this, but not to the point where it is so comedic the erotic edge is lost. I know there are some lose ends - mainly around the witch and Norbert, but I plan on resolving them in future chapters.

The second story is the "Sex Ed 101 Day 1Open in new Window. and "Sex Ed 101:Day 2Open in new Window. series. I know where I want to take this long term, but I am struggling with lessons 3-5 ish. Eventually I am going to move this outside the class room as Kaitlyn finds herself sinking further into depravity, but I am stuck on the connection between where I am with this shy young girl and where I want her to end up.
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stories needing suggestions · 05-17-10 11:19am
by A Non-Existent User
Re: stories needing suggestions · 05-17-10 12:52pm
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Re: stories needing suggestions · 07-30-10 9:07am
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