I am facing some writers/editor's block on two of my stories. Can someone look at them and offer suggestions?
The first story is "Princess Aurora's Dilemma - Unabridged" . I am looking to blend more comedy into this, but not to the point where it is so comedic the erotic edge is lost. I know there are some lose ends - mainly around the witch and Norbert, but I plan on resolving them in future chapters.
The second story is the "Sex Ed 101 Day 1" and "Sex Ed 101:Day 2" series. I know where I want to take this long term, but I am struggling with lessons 3-5 ish. Eventually I am going to move this outside the class room as Kaitlyn finds herself sinking further into depravity, but I am stuck on the connection between where I am with this shy young girl and where I want her to end up.
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