Well, I don't know much about others but usually stories get evil and gentle ones to create a kind of balance. I know too gentle can be like that (one of the very first lines of one of my stories got stuck because there was no action element)
I'm sorry if this seems to be impertinent, I just wanted to be kind of informative. Anyway, you could make reviews and suggestions to other writers.
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Too gentle? · 12-14-09 11:24pm by A Non-Existent User
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