Don't be hard on yourself! Never, EVER apologize for what you've written!
Very detailed, you even gave us measurements! Don't sweat it. You did fine.
I, myself? I couldn't quite get a grip on what it looked like, maybe I got too distracted with all those words! A little jumbled up, but you put a lot into it, and I can see that. Write on!
EDIT: Oh, and it might have to be ASR simply because it says "sexual assault division". Mods, let me know if I'm wrong.
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