Yeah, Veritas is very good at his swordmanship. Plus the reflexes and stuff of a loquiri. Yeah, he's probably not The Best. But pretty close to it. Only a crazed or foolhardy guy would dare come at an active loquiri.
The problem is I'm not too good at battle/sparring scenes--not as good as you. nor am I comfortable explaining Kor's style of fighting.
Maybe you and I could both work on it--Monday afternoon?
Never argue with your characters...they always win.
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