Noticing Newbies

hey whats up guys!
my name is devon, and im new to this site, only a bout 2 weeks since i joined. i have a creative writing class, and all we do is sit around and write all day, so i joined here and started writing!
i have a new book that im writing, it is a fantasy (may be a series, who knows) and i hope people ike it, im not very far, but im hoping to get it pubished later on (doesnt everybody?)

anyway the series (if it ends up being one) is called "Revival" and book 1 is called "The Vessel" but i may change it later, im prone to do that a lot.

i hope people will go read it and give me some reviews, its 150 points per review lol (what is that a penny and a half?) so plz go read and rate, i love critisizm, good or bad.

im not sure about the rules about URL's here, so im just going to go for it, if its against the rules someone just yell at me and ill take it off. kk l8.

heres the link to Revival book one, (the part i have written to neway)

http://www.writing.com/main/view_item/item_id/1518162