I like this poem a lot. It surely sounds like a muse is working through you in this poem. Again, I don't intend for that to mean you are possessed by some alien being. I just feel that you do have to sit and listen for whatever the inspiration is to tell you where to start and guide you on your path. There's room for editing after the words are spilled onto the page. Then the poet has the opportunity to ponder and rearrange and find the right words to make the poem as meaningful as it can be--as powerful as it can be. Does that make sense?
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