Keep on hanging in there! You're doing great. From what I've read, your story looks interesting. I'm wondering what happens with Mike and Iris. Their little coffee meeting was interesting; a little awkward, but that's to be expected when two people meet for the first time. I thought his comment about 'it might not be a bad thing' was witty and that it broke the ice a little bit. I enjoyed it.
Write on!
Deborah
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