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Rated: 13+ · Message Forum · Writing.Com · #1355364
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Jan 9, 2008 at 2:44am
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Re: Please Review
I reviewed the first part. I hope you're okay if I come back to the rest somewhat later.

The tip about the adverbs probably refers to all the part of story ;) so if you decide, you can already start making correction.

Cheers,
N.
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Please Review · 01-08-08 8:17pm
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