Don't be shy, ADD A CHAPTER forum

Well, POV is a hard thing to come up with personally. It can make the diference in any story. So I think that you should try a few diferent points of view, and see which one works best. And as for adding to really good and detailed interactive stories, (Like Reality Drifter "wink wink") Others adding to it is easy if they stick to the story line. It's like taking a child on it's first walk. You give them the start, help along the way, but in the end, they finish. If you give someone a good begining, they can usually come up with something (unless they are a snob who's sole pourpose is to wreak other's fun by adding really short chapters that make no sence) that is really good.