Noticing Newbies

F YOU WANT TO SEE INTO MY SOUL AND REALLY 'KNOW' ME - READ "ME LOOKING OUT"

IT'S JUST A START BUT IT IS TRUE, REAL AND DEF ABOUT ME. I WANT TO SHAPE IT INTO SOMETHING MORE THAN JUST THE RAW THING THAT IT IS BUT I NEED YOU! TO TELL ME HOW...

FANCY A CHALLENGE?

I initially came onto the site to get help in reviewing just one piece that I have struggled with mentally to get to where I want it to be. All help and comments on "ME LOOKING OUT" will be gratefully received.

Since then I have discovered that there is an amazing community of people out there as well.

So please read my piece, be as harsh as you like in telling me what you think and come by and say Hi. I need to know if the work is worth pursuing and if so, how can I make it better/more interesting etc etc etc...

I'm a newbie and need support - I would like to think that I could get this published but it is a long way from that yet

THANK YOU!

Dan