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Jul 9, 2007 at 11:50pm
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Re: So there I have it - feedback from an agent, now what?
by A Non-Existent User

Hmm. Just off the top of my head, in these last few moments before I dash to my plane, I have this one thought: tighten up your prose.

Lack of "spark" is usually a code word for "too many words and not enough substance".

For example, your sig lists a work titled "forger of dreams". A stronger title would be, "dreamforger".

Now I have to run! Good luck!


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