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Apr 2, 2007 at 12:14pm
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by A Non-Existent User
Tears flowed down my cheeks as i held her close to my lips

Her face was pale and weary,her skin were like almonds

Cold pulses ran through my spine as i began to recapitulate what i had in stock for her

But lying down at my laps was the cold body of my beloved.

I began to imagine seeing the last of her on earth

At a point "DEATH" came to my mind

Death where does your power lie? were the words that echoed through the entire building

But it was of no use, because she had already gone, gone to eternal rest

At a point i wanted to curse God but my conscience did a wonderful job by preventing me from the act

I had no one to go to, no place for shelter, no one to call a family, precisely i was hopeless

A look at her dead corpse brought my body to a gilt and to be specific i had no alternative than to die and leave this reckless world

Quickly i went towards an empty box lying beside the wall which in it contained an acid in a little bottle

Unknown to me the acid was substituted with kerosene

So i uncorked the bottle then poured in all its contents into my dry mouth once i did
so it was then i realized that the bait to take my life was canceled so i had to..

"DIE ANOTHER DAY"
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my entry · 04-02-07 12:14pm
by A Non-Existent User

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