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Reviews/Critiques/Editing for fiction--esp. Romance/Love. All ratings & lengths accepted.
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Jan 10, 2007 at 4:43am
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REVIEW PLEASE!!!
by Grace Author IconMail Icon
Need a review on this novel, the genre is Romance/Love. So far it's only 4 Chapters long (with prologue). Sending the gp's by email right now. Thanks in advance!

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REVIEW PLEASE!!! · 01-10-07 4:43am
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