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Dec 13, 2006 at 7:25am
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Re: Sunshine Girl

Striking and well crafted with a good backstory, easily engaged with by the reader. Very poignant in its tale.

The lyrics were beautiful and the snapshot of a memory was portrayed beautifully

The piece scanned well on the page, as well as working when read aloud. I really enjoyed it, and the neat simple conclusion was easily identifiable and feelings mutually shared by any mother.

Well done and thank you for sharing.


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Sunshine Girl · 11-11-06 8:53pm
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