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Nov 26, 2006 at 6:57am
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Re: It's been awhile
Firstly, doesn't it make a pleasant change to be able to read these works in differing fonts - far more opportunity for expressing personality.

Autumn poems are a particular favourite of mine - and this one reminds me why.

Stanzas easy to read and well spaced phrasing - accessable not only on the page but aurally as well.

The phrase "but time washes away....." particularly chimed with me, and is one reason why I shall keep this poem bookmarked to return to - again "walking with no destination....." . Evocative and I can smell the orange autumn air.

Thank you for sharing, and I am sorry it has taken me so long to review.

Best wishes Shani



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It's been awhile · 10-11-06 6:06pm
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