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Rated: E · Message Forum · Opinion · #1108422
Poetry and Short Prose professionally and constructively reviewed by experienced writers
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Oct 25, 2006 at 8:06am
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Re: A review would be greatly appreciated.
Sorry for the delay in reviewing, but life has been very hectic lately.

Very clear prose which held drama and tension through the piece.. the last Stanza particularly worked for me, the use of repetition with the word reflection, was particularly clever.

The backstory, well portrayed and illustrated, and I found it very easy to engage with the feelings and emotions highlighted within.

Thank you for sharing it...

Shani Phethean-Hubble

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A review would be greatly appreciated. · 09-23-06 9:27pm
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