Writer's Fallout Shelter

Hello all! New to this site, My name is Jason and I hail from a strange and mysterious land called New Jersey. The weather is inhuman, the people are, by and large, crazy, and my household appliances plot against me.

Aside from these issues it is good to be here! I've posted the first draft of my first novel (an ill-tempered rant against capitalism and religon in the form of a nifty space pirate yarn) called Iceni Queen. It is on the sponsored items list and viewable at my portfolio, user: DocFlamingo.

The first five chapters are in a more or less readable form and I'd greatly apreciate anyone's input as I don't know a lot of writer types in these parts.

Good day to all,

Jason