Kinda like that guy on AFV? (America's Funniest (Home) Videos). Too bad he was holding the camera...
And to make this actually have some relevance: I agree, especially if it's the first, you should concentrate on the emotional aspects. We don't really need heavy descriptions, that would be a turn-off in this setting especially.
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