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Rated: 13+ · Message Forum · Writing · #980111
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Jun 23, 2006 at 9:32pm
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I thought it was pretty good. Interesting concept for a poem. The second stanza didn't flow as well as the others for me, but that could just be my reading of it. My brain could be the choppy one.

I gave did like it, and I think I just upped your rating a smidge.
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