Writer's Fallout Shelter

*screams* I thought I'd finally gotten away from references to "The Yellow Wallpaper" lol. Sorry read it 3 times in college.

As to the question I always thought it was a matter of what moves the story forward. Sometimes you need more description up front and other times it works better dispursed throughout.

I personally have trouble with this. But I think that's why this siteis so helpful you can post your story and someone can say hey it would be better if you added something here. I have a friend who is doing that for me with my novel.