so nice to see such a beautiful poem on one of the most meaningful songs.
"The sky is gray and white and cloudy,
Sometimes I think it's hanging down on me.
And it's a hitchhike a hundred miles.
I'm a rag-a-muffin child."
One suggestion, unless you did it on purpose:
"Cloudy is the skies" has to be "cloudy are the skies."
Very nice work.
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