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Rated: E · Message Forum · Writing · #980384
Got sentence blues? Can't seem to make it fit? Help is on the way...
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Jun 14, 2005 at 3:22pm
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A damp, penetrating cold surrounded him, the kind that crept into his bones, causing him to pull his tattered Navy pea coat closer to him, to cover his pitiful thin frame.


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better sentence · 06-14-05 3:22pm
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