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Got sentence blues? Can't seem to make it fit? Help is on the way...
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Jun 13, 2005 at 3:23pm
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Example of a sentence needing more punch
Welcome everyone!

I'll start out with an example of a sentence that I think could use some help. You can post your own sentences in a new post or reply to a post and help someone out with thier sentence.

Just remember to have fun, but take the artist serious when trying to offer a helping hand.

"The day was cold."


Write, write, write, and when your done, write some more.
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Example of a sentence needing more punch · 06-13-05 3:23pm
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