Well, shucks and darn. You have a sharp eye for sentence structure and flow, as well as grammar, which I appreciate, not to mention my readers who have to suffer through my occassional typo or flawed sentence. Moreover, I'm glad you're enjoying the story more. I hope you'll stay with it to the happy or bitter end.
Marshall
PS. Thanks for posting your reviews, and therefore plugging my story, in your forum. Too cool of you.
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