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Jan 20, 2005 at 5:36pm
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Two Poems Need Feedback
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Hello!

This isn't my first time stopping or visiting, but it is my first time posting work for the hope of getting feedback on it. I have two poems which are my firsts for actually, purposely, going into the Erotica realm, so I thought I'd post them here since I am a regular:

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Any feedback is much appreciated! Thank you!

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Two Poems Need Feedback · 01-20-05 5:36pm
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