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Sep 6, 2023 at 12:27am
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Commentary: "Dodging Out of Dodge"
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Anybody else really like the most recent chapter? It’s really a beautiful thing to see Will to finally be standing up for himself against a bully without wearing a mind band, even if he does have a little bit of Gordon in him. I was a little worried that he was gonna knuckle under to Kirkham like a dipshit, but I was so happy to see him fight back even though it was probably gonna get him an asskicking if Gordon hadn’t intervened.

This entire Gordon plot line was such a highlight of the interactive even before this, and maybe it’s just because it plays to my tastes, but this chapter brought it to an entirely different level in regards to showing the development both Will and Gordon have gone through.
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Commentary: "Dodging Out of Dodge" · 09-06-23 12:27am
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Re: Loving the new chapters for the Gordon/Will storyline · 09-06-23 1:41am
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Re: Re: Loving the new chapters for the Gordon/Will story... · 09-13-23 8:16am
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Re: Re: Re: Loving the new chapters for the Gordon/Will s... · 09-14-23 4:14pm
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Re: Re: Re: Re: Loving the new chapters for the Gordon/Wi... · 10-22-23 9:56am
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