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Sep 14, 2011 at 4:25pm
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Edited: September 14, 2011 at 4:26pm
Review # 2: First Love
Well done, creating a poem that conveys the emotion of love! To feel love like this, is best left to the description of a poet :) Your words move fluidly, they easily dance from the read's tongue.

My favorite line: "I will forever remember the sweet smell and taste of your bubble gum." - Smells and tastes always bring a flood of memories, strong enough to feel as though you are in the moment still.
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First Love · 09-08-11 11:43am
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*Star* Review # 2: First Love · 09-14-11 4:25pm
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Re: Review # 2: First Love · 09-14-11 6:28pm
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