Well done, creating a poem that conveys the emotion of love! To feel love like this, is best left to the description of a poet :) Your words move fluidly, they easily dance from the read's tongue.
My favorite line: "I will forever remember the sweet smell and taste of your bubble gum." - Smells and tastes always bring a flood of memories, strong enough to feel as though you are in the moment still.
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