\"Writing.Com
*Magnify*
SPONSORED LINKS
BY ONLINE AUTHORS
Printed from https://writing.com/main/forums/action/view/message_id/2297476
Item Icon
\"Reading Printer Friendly Page Tell A Friend
(11)
by Leila Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ · Message Forum · Contest · #1808166
Closed for judging.
<< Previous  •  Message List  •  Next >>
Reply  •  Post New
Sep 14, 2011 at 2:35pm
#2297476
Edited: September 14, 2011 at 4:20pm
Review: First Love
A first kiss is always remembered with emotions attached and you definitely were able to convey these through your words.
Some of the lines were a bit choppy, and it felt like you might have been trying to rhyme some words, for the sake of rhyming. Overall it had a good feel to it though.
MESSAGE THREAD
First Love · 09-12-11 3:29pm
by cursive-stroke Author IconMail Icon
Re: First Love · 09-12-11 4:21pm
by Leila Author IconMail Icon
Re: First Love · 09-13-11 4:52pm
by Lesley Scott Author IconMail Icon
Re: Re: First Love · 09-14-11 8:51am
by cursive-stroke Author IconMail Icon
*Star* Review: First Love · 09-14-11 2:35pm
by unforgettable1 Author IconMail Icon
Re: First Love · 09-15-11 10:51am
by Carwyn Author IconMail Icon
Re: First Love · 09-26-11 10:37pm
by Summer Wind is Healing Author IconMail Icon

The following section applies to this forum item as a whole, not this individual post.
Any feedback sent through it will go to the forum's owner, Leila.
Printed from https://writing.com/main/forums/action/view/message_id/2297476