WdC Birthday Review Raffle (XGC Part)

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WdC 2021 Birthday Review Raffle  (13+) Grand prize of 1 million GPs! Prizes totaling over 2 million GPs just for posting reviews. #2255764 by Schnujo's Doing NaNoWriMo?

except that with these items, you get 3, 4, or 5 tickets, depending on the helpfulness of the review.

3 tickets = General, "good job" sort of review

4 tickets = 1-2 corrections or legitimate suggestions* to improve the item

5 tickets = 3 or more corrections or legitimate suggestions* to improve the item

* Legitimate suggestions are things that would add value to the item, not simply changes that would bring it in line with your sensibilities.

Example of legitimate suggestion--Your main character's name is very difficult to pronounce. Consider including a pronunciation key at the top of the story or maybe early on, have someone pronounce it wrong, then she corrects them with the phonetic pronunciation so the audience knows how to say it. Alternately, you could change the spelling to ensure it's more phonetic or have her simply go by a shortened version of it throughout the rest of the book. You could also change it to a less exotic name, though I think that might spoil the story since the setting is so exotic.

Example of non-legitimate suggestion--Your main character's name is very difficult to pronounce. You should change it.

Note: Most items are not perfect and probably don't warrant 5 stars, however, if you do give less than 5 stars, it is encouraged that you specify why. It can be frustrating to receive a 4-star review that does nothing but sings the praises of your work. However, star ratings are not counted in this raffle. Whatever rating you leave, only the helpfulness of your suggestions and corrections counts towards additional tickets.

Qualifying reviews will be a minimum of 300 characters (note that 250 characters is a common minimum, but we request 300 without ML code).
They will have any suggestions and/or corrections separated into a specific section or highlighted or something so when checking for accuracy, we can easily find the suggested changes to determine the appropriate number of tickets the review qualifies for.
They will be encouraging, even when offering corrections and/or suggestions.
They will be fair and honest, but with the understanding that the reviewer may not agree with the theme, viewpoint, or other specifics the author has chosen. Review based on the merits of the writing, not whether you agree or not.
They will be correctly listed for the number of tickets they qualify for. Reviews not specified as deserving a certain number of tickets will automatically be designated as 1 ticket.
Reviews must be Public so we can verify them.
Three suggested ways to fix a problem is greatly appreciated, but still only count as 1 suggestion because you are only fixing 1 thing in their item.
Reviews may be affiliated with any group and entered in any other activity so long as they follow our rules as well.
Note that this forum is rated XGC. If your review or the title of the item being reviewed is above 13+, please list the review here. For more information on content ratings, see "Content Rating System (CRS)" .