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This is just a short story I'm writing to get reviews. Tell me if it's good or what i can do to get it better. THANKS!!!

Lidnesy is in the kitchen making dinner for her 2 sons and husband for when they get home. There is a knock on the door. Lidnesy answers it and there is a man in all black and a black ski mask.
"Stop! Please! I didn't do anything!"
"SHUT UP YOU DAMN WOMAN!"He takes out a pistol from his pocket.
"Please!" The man shoots her and leaves. Her husband and sons get home a little while later, around seven o'clock.and the husband rushes the kids back outside while sobbing. He calls 911 and they come in around fifteen minutes.
"I'm Jarred Fox," said the officer shaking the man's hand. "Did you witnesss this?"
"No sir," said the man through sobs.
"She appears to be shot in the side of the neck and the bullet was from a 22 pistol," said an officer by the name of Johnathan Skies.
"We'll have to take the body back for inspection sir," said Jarred.
"I understand," he said watching them wrap up his wife's body.


Jarred brings in the man's son Dylan to talk to.
"Hey buddy. I need you to answer a couple questions for me. Ok?"
Dylan nods his head approvingly.
"Did anything weird happen close to now?" he asked in a kind voice.
"Yes," said Dylan.
"Can you tell me what?"
"There was a man always around mommy. She was mad when he was there. Very mad," said Dylan.
"What did he look like Dylan?" asked Jarred.
"Long black hair, a beard. Always carries a red phone in his back left pocket. Mommy says his name is Ted. He also always hangs around Bill's Coffe Shop on Monday mornings, around nine-thirty am.
"Thank you Dylan," said Jarred.
Jarred told Johnathan what Dylan had told him and Johnathan planned to go to the coffee shop on Monday.
I'm going to stop right here to keep you guys guessing. i will write more though.